2nd Poetry Post !!! Comments”"?
Written awhile back, honest comments please!! Just letting you see some of what I did! Thanks Can you name the two types of Poetry?
_ Child’s Summer Day_
Sun shining with such bright light
Screams of children, sounds of their delight!
Softly kicked sand through their feet
Having a picnic with the freinds they do meet ,
Warmth is what I feel, as my hand touches, the grainy sand,
Look around you isn’t this just grand!
Sounds of the ocean and the smell of the salty air!
All colors of unbrellas with such a flair!
The rolling sensation of sun’srays,
The sound of childrens hip hip oh yea!
A childhood memory of that warm summer day,
I go there often, even today!
Just Wasting Time_ new
How many have you had
She says standing at the bar
Third one and counting
Is my reply back to her
About this time show up- who
Bartender- you knew
What can I get you -one more
She frowns down at me
And did down just- just one more!
Thanks for your comments, yes definately a child at heart, hmmm childrens poem book, nice response!!
The first one is absolutely adorable for a childrens book or something of that nature.
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Dance in the Dark (Hardcover) $22.77 It`s 1969. The Summer of Love is a fading memory, but the Vietnam War rages on. Scott Elliott, veteran operative of Hollywood Security, agrees to find the runaway daughter of a has-been star. Her trail skirts the new and burgeoning business of hard-cor… |
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Something in the Air American Passion an (Paperback) $11.16 One image stands out in our collective memory of the 1968 Summer Olympics in Mexico City–African-American track stars Tommie Smith and John Carlos with their fists in the air atop the pedestal, after taking gold and bronze, respectively, in the 200-me… |
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Something in the Air (Paperback) $15.4 One image stands out in our collective memory of the 1968 Summer Olympics in Mexico City–African-American track stars Tommie Smith and John Carlos with their fists in the air atop the pedestal, after taking gold and bronze, respectively, in the 200-me… |
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Lost Soulful Doo Wop Treasures, Volume 1 $20.00 Excellent collection of 28 vocal group gems from the early 60s when doo-wop was making the transition into soul and there are some very soulful performances here. Many of the cuts are appearing on CD for the first time. Song list: THE CREATIONS: I Don’t Mind/ DAVID DAYTON & THE COLOS: The Search Is Over/ THE DISCIPLES OF SOUL: I Found Out/ THE DYNAMICS: Misery/ THE FIVE DU-TONES: Please Change Yo… |
